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This is the first of a five page spread drawn by Tony Moore ([link]). The others will be posted just as soon as I get them done.
I would really like some feedback on this. If there is any
thing you see that could help the page let me know! Practice and feedback are the best way to learn and I would like to build a healthy colorist portfolio for serious consideration.
**Thanks to some great feedback I have reworked some of the things on this page. I believe it has more atmosphere and "reads" a lot better.
I would really like some feedback on this. If there is any
thing you see that could help the page let me know! Practice and feedback are the best way to learn and I would like to build a healthy colorist portfolio for serious consideration.
**Thanks to some great feedback I have reworked some of the things on this page. I believe it has more atmosphere and "reads" a lot better.
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Hi - nice work - really nice vibe running through the page.
My only feedback, perhaps make the ace of diamonds pop out a little more - those cards feel key to the story, and I like how the Kind and Queen seem to stand out a little more. For some reason the red of the diamond seems more washed out next to the black of the clubs.
My only feedback, perhaps make the ace of diamonds pop out a little more - those cards feel key to the story, and I like how the Kind and Queen seem to stand out a little more. For some reason the red of the diamond seems more washed out next to the black of the clubs.